Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Chance Or Choice? Comments

Rating: 3.7

Life is about chance
Life is about choice
What if I’m your chance
But you’re not my choice?
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CeCe Lamberts
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Jitesh Shah 24 March 2014

very nice poem and also read my poem

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 March 2014

Absolutely brilliant.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 23 March 2014

i simply loved this poem...

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Stuart Kaler 23 March 2014

Very enjoyable - thank you......

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Mariam Daoud 23 March 2014

To Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi: I think there is something wrong with the poem too. I believe it is that the rhythm and choice of words are confusing. No Offense Cece Lamberts....0_0

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 March 2014

Chanced to choice and then choice for a chance well composed thank

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 24 March 2012

Something is not right with this poem! Could someone explain? Thank you..

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Vincent irwanto 23 March 2012

Great poem regarding life it self.I enjoyed reading it

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Roxy Del Mar 23 March 2012

Lovely :) such a powerful theme! One all humans can relate to... that, in my opinion, is what makes truly great poetry.

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Rajendran Muthiah 23 March 2012

What a thoughtful linguistic invention! The two words, 'Chance' and 'Choice' have equal number of letters, sounds and one syllable each. You met me by chance but don't make me your choice-Around this idea, you have built this poem. Beautiful.

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Lillian Houston 23 March 2012

I loved this one. Despite having opportunities by chance, it's by choice we take advantage of them.

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Ben Gieske 27 August 2007

A pleasant, delightful read. Nice way to frame your good friends oberservation. Opportunities missed, opportunities taken. Sometimes just a matter of seconds to be regretted or forgotten. Gives us poets a lot to think and write about.

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Robert Beksinski 19 June 2007

Great poem, i enjoyed reading it.

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Jonathan Robin 02 May 2007

C hance and Choice can coincide E mpowering emotive streams C hannelling empathy which seems E nergized as side by side L inks' stimulations undenied A dvance to tenderness that dreams M ay reinforce, on course, as gleams B eauty's truth, Truth's beauty - tide E nchanting, open, bona fide, R ecognized where two as team T aste harmony, tune into beam S erene, all conflict laid aside. CEntral aspirations shared CEments implicit joys prepared.

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Aashish Ameya 19 April 2007

CeCe you wrote beautifully, just love this...and thank you very much for give a thought to my beliefs...

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Madly In Love 18 April 2007

Wow CeCe this is an amazing poem

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