Life is about chance
Life is about choice
What if I’m your chance
But you’re not my choice?
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To Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi: I think there is something wrong with the poem too. I believe it is that the rhythm and choice of words are confusing. No Offense Cece Lamberts....0_0
Chanced to choice and then choice for a chance well composed thank
Something is not right with this poem! Could someone explain? Thank you..
Lovely :) such a powerful theme! One all humans can relate to... that, in my opinion, is what makes truly great poetry.
What a thoughtful linguistic invention! The two words, 'Chance' and 'Choice' have equal number of letters, sounds and one syllable each. You met me by chance but don't make me your choice-Around this idea, you have built this poem. Beautiful.
I loved this one. Despite having opportunities by chance, it's by choice we take advantage of them.
A pleasant, delightful read. Nice way to frame your good friends oberservation. Opportunities missed, opportunities taken. Sometimes just a matter of seconds to be regretted or forgotten. Gives us poets a lot to think and write about.
C hance and Choice can coincide E mpowering emotive streams C hannelling empathy which seems E nergized as side by side L inks' stimulations undenied A dvance to tenderness that dreams M ay reinforce, on course, as gleams B eauty's truth, Truth's beauty - tide E nchanting, open, bona fide, R ecognized where two as team T aste harmony, tune into beam S erene, all conflict laid aside. CEntral aspirations shared CEments implicit joys prepared.
CeCe you wrote beautifully, just love this...and thank you very much for give a thought to my beliefs...
very nice poem and also read my poem