Tuesday, November 29, 2016

Chance Encounter Comments

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Walking the amazing coastline,
Cup of coffee in the local Café
Sitting, observing people passing
Checking on dress sense today,
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John A'Hern
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Robert Murray Smith 18 April 2018

John, this is a well penned write. The imagery is powerful with sensitivity and insightfulness. It makes me wonder why we cannot all be as generous in spirit and actions as you have been.+++10

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Verity Fiammata 17 March 2017

I love this poem, John. I wish more people were brave enough to simply stop and talk to someone who's generally ignored.

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John Ahern 17 March 2017

Hi Verity, thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Stopping and asking created a poem, long live poetry.

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Kim Barney 29 November 2016

Yes, it could be you, or it could be me. Many of the homeless people have no choice but to be in their situation. I'm glad the you were able to help.

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John Ahern 29 November 2016

Thank you, Kim.

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Maveriqué Richard 29 November 2016

Nice write. I love the last stanza.

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John Ahern 29 November 2016

Thank you very much for your comment.

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