Thursday, March 6, 2014

Chance Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the knoll rolled the meadow blue brown and green
The silence of the Spring sky shielded the distant din
Winds blew in a dusty peace bought mind a soft solace
First star on the meridian chimed in the evening’s grace.
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 07 March 2014

A beautiful evening with the breeze playing around and the colourful panorama of natural beauty surrounding and the mind bathing in the brilliance of that twilight evening! But how the city lights have come to rob the beauty of the knoll, the dale and the meadow..... better retrace downhill....! Enjoyed the serenity of Nature.... A great write!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 March 2014

when we climb the knoll, we gasp for air and when we come down it seems to be quite easy geographically, but other slides are sometimes happy and sometimes sad, everything depend upon the situation...wonderful imagination, when it comes to nurse the scar..

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