Monday, January 14, 2008

Chance Comments

Rating: 5.0

please give me one more night
that's all i ask of you
a chance to watch the moonlight
sitting right beside you
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broken soul.. No more
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Roger Cornish 14 January 2008

Very nice poem! Well done.... I don't mind if they don't rhyme...... Your Imagery is good enough! RogerX.

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Shannon Wright 14 January 2008

Beautiful- one more night... i love it. -shannon

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