Thursday, March 23, 2017

Chameleon Eyes Comments

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While yet a small angel in Heaven,
Just before you were to be born,
You had an interview with God
To prepare you, and to warn
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Louis Rams 25 July 2018

your eyes may be chameleon, but your heart is solid red and that will not change even when you go to bed.

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Lucky for me. I'd look kind of strange with a checkerboard or patchwork heart! Thank you for your sweet, positive poetic comment! :)

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Sandra Feldman 24 March 2017

Precious, precious, precious, And so original too, In images and sense Possessing a great style Combining colors and skies blue Matching colors with the eyes, Fascinating, poem, rhythm That can only bring on smiles.

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Practicing Poetess 24 March 2017

Thank- you to my MAS (Mutual Admiration Society) buddy Sandra, who even DREAMS in poetry, and even her comments rhyme!

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