Saturday, October 24, 2020

Chameleon Confessions Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can be a Queen,
Also play,
A musical cat,
How do you
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Sandra Feldman
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Bri Edwards 27 October 2020

2 - It took a while for me to 'warm up to' this poem, but i like it. My favorite stanza is your last one. to MyPoemList. My Chameleon, Camille My favorite pet at home is my chameleon. She changes from chartreuse to vermilion She changes before my blurry evening eye. How, Camille, do you do that, and.....WHY? bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 27 October 2020

1 - line 2 why a comma? st.2 does " a love" refer to " dramatic impulse" ? so, you are an actor/actress? i think actresses are sometimes now referred to as actors. st.3 as an actress you are happy to have varied roles or emotions during roles, but NO silent parts! yes? (cont.)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 October 2020

A well created poem. Truly exceptional and splendid...5 stars*****

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Susan Williams 25 October 2020

You pose an interesting question- - if one were friends with an actor or actress. would you be able to rest assured that what she says or feels is for real or just an act.... that would make friendship a little distant, a tad suspicious, a question without an answer- -excellent poem, Sandra... top marks

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Quoth Theraven 25 October 2020

Sandra, All the lovely colors of the Chameleon in this, , . the dress rehearsal called life. QtR

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Kostas Lagos 24 October 2020

Wow, one of your best Sandra! 5 stars

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Deluke Muwanigwa 24 October 2020

Great poem. Sometimes there is a dangerous psychological overlap of reality and make believe leading to unintended results. My friend Trump is a good example. He believes his own lies. Unfortunately others believe his lies and a lot of unpleasant things like Covid deaths and race tensions spike. Sorry Trumpie...you are such an easy target.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2020

Yes, you can be a queen and you can feel dramatic and musical pulse. This poem is very amazingly penned.

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