Thursday, February 27, 2014

Challenging Cracks! Comments

Rating: 4.3

Paths are diverting!
Surprisingly end of one path is the beginning of new path.

Yes, you are right, I am mere a light,
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 08 January 2015

The poem shows firm determination to struggle and to find out a way out, a nice write.

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

beautiful write....no doubt why its on the homepage of PH..................traversing difficult terrains in life is what makes it beautiful....the use metaphors enriches the beauty of this write... I invite you to read my poem- -..To bosom thee.I'll rise

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Gajanan Mishra 01 April 2014

very beautiful and also thoughtful.

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Valsa George 27 March 2014

Wonderful resolution, Geetha! Turn challenges into opportunities and show the world that you are a star! Great write ! Welcome back! Thanks for your comment on my 300th poem!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

Today cracks started appearing Light is that driving force which will break the vessel of darkness, to spread the light everywhere... nice lines if path was straight what is there to fight? life is zigzag way only sight should not be lost in any way

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Rajesh Thankappan 04 March 2014

I agree with you on this. I am reminded of the old saying, ' every cloud has a silver lining.' Here, in this poem, the cracks let in light into the dark interiors of the earthenware. Similarly, when we crack under certain hostile circumstances we should not lose heart but allow the light of wisdom enter us. Beautiful write.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 March 2014

A very inspiring poem......Geetha..............life full of cracks and we go through to reach the goal at last.............life not an end itself.......en end without an end......well composed......

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Shraddha The Poetess 28 February 2014

very nice mam...................again a great poem from ur pen with a great thought............... thanx for sharing mam.. nd i also invite u to read my new one

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

Cracks seem to have a nice function, we can see through them to find the path. Beautifully developed in the poem. Thank you.

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V P Mahur 27 February 2014

Great read This Poem Dear Geetha thoughts are revolutionary and full of zeal Thanks Come and read My poems if possible for you

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