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vincent, your poetry has deinitely cjhanged for the better. there is so much more depth to it now. will keep reading for the jewel.

Somethings just come to be, we seem to have no warning, and even if we did, would the story still unfold, We should try our best not to judge anothers actions, this I find very hard to do, but am working on it For who knows how they would react in the same situation, we would have to be them to truly understand Instead we judge others on our expectations of how we think they should act, and this in turn leads us to a truer reflection of our-selves Love duncan X