Saturday, September 30, 2006

Challenge Comments

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Something obsessed...
That has to be possessed.
And It can not be obtained too easily,
Or it will quickly be left like the rest!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Kelly Allen Vinal 01 October 2006

Wonderful work, as always! Love this poem!

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 01 October 2006

Nice idea to write a poem about such a thing in life, too, about Challenge. And it's quite neatly expressed, for that matter.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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