Friday, December 23, 2016

Challenge Of The Doors Comments

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House surrounded by stonewalls
Cast Iron Gate guarding it all,
Entrance steps lay before you
Quite challenging, do not enter slowly.
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John A'Hern
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Bri Edwards 15 November 2017

sounds like a dream. this happened to you? Quite challenging, do not enter slowly. ..................why not enter slowly? hmm? would you have chickened out if given more time to think about it? ? Darkness makes them quite forbidding..............yes, could be forbidding or foreboding. but, if forbidding, i guess you didn't care! thanks for the tour. bri :) and thanks for Poet's Notes!

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John Ahern 16 November 2017

Thank you Bri, your comments are appreciated as is taking the time to read the poem.

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