you are chalk & I am cheese;
somehow you became my smorgasbord
while I write poetry on your blackboard
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An interesting combination, kind of like the cheese packet in a box of macaroni and cheese.
4. The efforts you have put in to add rhyme and rhythm to the smorgasbord of imagery have not gone in vain, dear poet. Enjoyed.
3. Loved the poem. Top score. And added to Myfav
2. The beauty of enigmatic images epitomes in ‘ampersand'. And then the concluding lines steals the readers' heart and mind.
An extraordinary poem, brilliant in its own way. The images'chalk' and ‘cheese' are accentuated by use of words/images like smorgasbord and blackboard, and then taken to further heights. (Contd)
Superb poem. You have used chalk and cheese in articulate manner