Chalice And The Blade...Demons Von Desire Comments

a wonderful sweet poem and of course who dare not to give you 10+++++..loved it

I tried to pick the words i liked best but after a couple of reads, i liked them all. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poetic tale. :)

I don't know words to comment on it.but i wish you will keep it up.

Most enjoyable and challenging poem Best Regards Steve

An interesting write Saadat...great imagery used...10+++

hello sadaat ...this is a different one indeed...first I liked the title 'Chalice and Blade'..... and nice play with the words too.. very creative and musical .....i enjoyed it through out...I like these Words… “The possibilities. Responsibilities. A peep a peer, while angels sneer. Frenetically nay scuttle. Fear not rebuttal. Boundless lure, Insecure, Smite, without respite. This poem, .. is a clear cut polished gem…. Ideal words are used…. Refreshment every sip of the way….enjoyed it very much…. 10++ Cheeeerss Shan

You have well taken care of both the inner and the outer, A greater message does take few more words than usual, isn't it? I really enjoyed it, no bargain, just the full score 10/10

fabulous written poem............Thanks for the great read!