Friday, July 14, 2006

Chains Comments

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She took a long drive
to escape her dark life
she was chained as a woman
and chained as a wife
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Charles M Moore
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Not a member No 4 25 February 2007

When head takes on heart it usually comes out on the losing end, regardless of the strength of the arguments. These chains can be so difficult to break! A fine insight into the issue, and as ever, smooth and flowing poetry. jim

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Linda Ori 16 July 2006

Women stay for different reasons -they're mothers, wives, lovers, and generally keep the homefires burning. We stay for security, even when our spirits are screaming for freedom. But something we know is easier than something we don't - and there's the rub. Great insight, Charlie. Linda

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Esther Leclerc 15 July 2006

This is a compassionate, insightful write, Charlie. Thank you for understanding the difficult choice that some women make. If you can, this might benefit by a third stanza.

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Patricia Gale 14 July 2006

From an x- wife and mother... your words speak the truth. Insight is splendid, well done.The flow wonderful.

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Anna Russell 14 July 2006

Poignant but not melancholy. That'll be a 10 then. Hugs Anna xxx

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Charles M Moore

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