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Chains Of Life Comments

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Chains of life are hidden in fate
These always vary from mate to mate
At times one feels that life is great
But every next moment it seems third rate
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 May 2020

With broken wings how one can try With injured body from earth to sky With mundane desires how soul can fly With lot of thirst and tongue so dry Chains of life are in disdains. the verse endings sky, dry etc... how much struggle you have taken to write such rhyming ending of the verses. a wonderful poem dear Colonel.. tony

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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