Saturday, January 21, 2023

Chains Of Life On Me Comments

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Chains of life on me! ! !
Gains lost to the wind;
Birds free to fly but, i cannot flly!
In pains i do walk,
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Edward Kofi Louis
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This poem is among the Best Members Poems list continuously since the day it was published on PoemHunter. Great achievement. Congratulations

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Pains of life… great. Profound poem. Congratulations too. This poem ranks #62 in the Best Member Poems list on PoemHunter for

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 January 2023

Today this brilliant poem is ranked as number 70 as The Best Member Poems of Member Poets. CONGRATS dear Edward.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2023

Optimism superb in this pain.

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 January 2023

Love the touch of positiveness in the poem. Thats how life sums up.

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Bharati Nayak 22 January 2023

You are in pains, but you are not daunted.Even surrounded by negativity, you focus only on positives.That is your great strength.Thank you for sharing a beautiful poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2023

Very well articulated thoughts. Bravo!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 January 2023

well and woe are the reversing chain of life! nice to read you after a long time

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M. Asim Nehal 22 January 2023

Excellent poem EKL, welcome back.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

Thank you so much for sharing this amazing great poem, dear Edward. God's Blessings be greatest.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

A great well weaved poem about: pain, lessons of life, struggle, survival, realistic, tears, hardships, I so fully understand and have absorbed your excellent poem about the heavy life you must face. TOP Score, dear Edward. Brilliant poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 January 2023

I have read your poem with very much attention, I understand the theme of the brillian t poem about the pains and chains of life. It is indeed so very difficult if one is the one who must earn for his living and for the rest. Especially when the rains do not yet appear, so very difficult.

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