Chains of life on me! ! !
Gains lost to the wind;
Birds free to fly but, i cannot flly!
In pains i do walk,
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Pains of life… great. Profound poem. Congratulations too. This poem ranks #62 in the Best Member Poems list on PoemHunter for
Today this brilliant poem is ranked as number 70 as The Best Member Poems of Member Poets. CONGRATS dear Edward.
Love the touch of positiveness in the poem. Thats how life sums up.
You are in pains, but you are not daunted.Even surrounded by negativity, you focus only on positives.That is your great strength.Thank you for sharing a beautiful poem.
well and woe are the reversing chain of life! nice to read you after a long time
Thank you so much for sharing this amazing great poem, dear Edward. God's Blessings be greatest.
A great well weaved poem about: pain, lessons of life, struggle, survival, realistic, tears, hardships, I so fully understand and have absorbed your excellent poem about the heavy life you must face. TOP Score, dear Edward. Brilliant poem
I have read your poem with very much attention, I understand the theme of the brillian t poem about the pains and chains of life. It is indeed so very difficult if one is the one who must earn for his living and for the rest. Especially when the rains do not yet appear, so very difficult.
This poem is among the Best Members Poems list continuously since the day it was published on PoemHunter. Great achievement. Congratulations