Chains Comments

This is a great a little dark but deep beautiful piece, each line compliment well with eachother a great job i give it a 10

this is really........whats the word.........evil, mischiveous and depressing.Its samewhere amongst those words. It takes alot to write stuff like this. Form the beginning of this poem to the end, you where able keep that same.....vibration and thats hard to acheive, so yeah well done.

Written with great thought....