Chains Comments

I readed your poem and fell in love imedetaly the words that you used the detail of the poem was what i would call beyond amazing.It was everything i was loking for in the title.I also loved the way you put darkness in the meaning of the title.I am very impressed it was well written your a amazing poet.

We can escape our pain by helping others. In helping others we also help ourselves. We are what we think, like we are what we eat. Speaking out in this piece, so tremendously well done, is the first step in recognizing the problem, therefore we can begin to unlock the chains that bind us. Pain is the most overwhelming when we don't reach out for help by feeling that we are alone. So many people feel alone, but once connected can unlock each others chains, and we by helping others are empowered to escape our own trap by touching another ones heart, therefore finding the key. Thank you for sharing your great talent with this masterful piece.

Wow..when i imagined this, i just cant open my eyes...it's really pain in front of my eyes...Maybe lot of things came to you and make you create this so real...Silent Poet i hope if we chained by many strong forces, we could find a way to break this with some other way...what use we fight and left broken at last? we can act like water, it never look as strong as we think but they can make a strong stone broken...be strong SG, you are strong i know it_Unwritten Soul

Dark and full of pain we can all feel simply by just tuning to your work. Great sp.

It never snows where I live, but I saw snowflakes falling, freezing my heart by the hurt in your poem. Here, I'm sharing the sunshine we're having today, may it turn you into a happy butterfly...

So interesting, my eyes were realy stuck in the words, nice one!

Wow, very powerful poem. A very good poem full of emorion.

Lovely poem, dark but excellent.

You sure don't do sunshine and rainbows do you? ... I guess that's why I keep reading your work... Agonizingly beautiful poem... Well done...

Truley an amazing poem! Well written! ! !

This poem is beautiful, I liked the imagery of it, truly this is a phenomenal piece, by an even more phenomenal poet! Amazing work.

great imagery, , , , it sound like a nightmare....well penned poem.

WOW :) Speechless... seriously! Wonderful. I imagined that as I read. Very vivid. Written perfectly :)