Tuesday, July 13, 2010

Chained Up, Without Fault Comments

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I'm chained up, without fault
Hair all over the place
Stained clothes worn
Eyes droopy
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Noorie Ali
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David Beckham 14 July 2010

Harrowing experience. Its details dig deep into your skin like the claws of Freddy. Well laid out. Nicey done

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Sally Plumb Plumb 14 July 2010

I didn't fully understand this piece of writing.I'll try again another day.

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A slave having no blame...chained up, without fault. A well expressed poem. Your pen painted a vivid picture. So well done! ; D

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Noorie Ali

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