Chains all around me, its getting hard to move
They're twisting around my neck and I begin to choke
You are smiling and teasing me
You just stand there holding the key, laughing as if this was a joke
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This was nice....I feel chained in luv at times 2 DIMPLzZ
fasntastic can u comment my poems? thanks
;) hehehe! ... i like that! thanks for sharing, +10
Damn! ....that's beautiful my kind of love! hehe... +10
so, explain this one to me... You were chained up in her love, so you get her to fall in love with you, so maybe now she's chained up in your love? And you still love her? Most guys flee from that kind of love, but i really like this poem. 10++++