Saturday, June 20, 2015

Chained To The Past Comments

Rating: 3.5

My future is captive of my
past
Across each day a dark shadow
cast
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Herbert Dry
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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 20 June 2015

The picture was perfectly painted. Forgettable past, horrific now, and a bleak future. Well done. Please review my poem 'The Empress Of My Heart'

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