Saturday, October 15, 2011

Chained Souls, Body And Mind Comments

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heavy winds of pain surge in my body as clouds,
Boldered rocks hung low in my soul,
Wieghing me down to the ground,
Blood gushes out with no sound,
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Calven Butch
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Prachi Agrawal 22 October 2011

very beautiful and inspiring poem..........well written

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Crimson Love 21 October 2011

This is sucha beautiful poem, epic perhaps is the word, your poem is filled with passion, very amazing! :)

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Vipins Puthooran 15 October 2011

It's an emotional poem but i like the optimism of the lines in the end.... Well written...

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