heavy winds of pain surge in my body as clouds,
Boldered rocks hung low in my soul,
Wieghing me down to the ground,
Blood gushes out with no sound,
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This is sucha beautiful poem, epic perhaps is the word, your poem is filled with passion, very amazing! :)
It's an emotional poem but i like the optimism of the lines in the end.... Well written...
very beautiful and inspiring poem..........well written