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'a wavering candle flame to be put off by the slightest breeze' Hi Sreelekha, This is mine... your words became my experience as my heart started beating faster reading your writing. I could never be an outsider reading this poem. I am in it till the very end... it'd stay with me. I am so glad I stumbled upon you... love your writing! Deva

This poem exemplaphies pure brilliance...and if this poem is about you then you are as young as you want to be. It is manifest destiny that you be whom ever you want to be, and there is no reson to impress anybody who is doing nothing for you

nice poem...........but you are young