Chain Verse ~ A Departure Note Comments
Tomorrow I shall roam free,
Free from the burden of this body,
Body that captivated me for long,
Long enough to keep me alive.
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Enjoy the dust with which I am made of and And I shall roam free till eternity for ever and ever.----A wonderful poem!
Lovely poem. Tomorrow when the soul will see the light, Light of the day from the darkness of this body, Body which is mortal, but bundled in ego, Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.
Marvellous poem. Very well written. The unbroken chain speaks volume about the philosophy of this life.
Freedom from self is supreme and this poem takes us to the extreme of the freedom.
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'Enjoy the dust with which I am made of and And I shall roam free till eternity for ever and ever.'...a great thought nicely crafted....top score