Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Chain Of Love Comments

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With the chain of love
I have tied you up
Winning your heart is
Like winning world cup
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Asif Andalib
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Young Church Poetry 12 December 2012

Wow this is so beautiful and lovely. This is how love is supposed to be, great write.

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Matt Mooney 02 December 2012

A sacred time captured simply in the ink of poetry.

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Yash Shinde 30 November 2012

I loved the ninth and tenth line.....great and superb lovely write with the ink of love

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So Close 29 November 2012

short but superb! ! ! the lines Winning your heart is Like winning world cup really like it!

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Onyeme John 28 November 2012

Nice poem Asif....I like the rhymes too

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Sekharan Pookkat 28 November 2012

Love emerges positive energy and makes the world lively and sustainable good work

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Anita Sehgal 28 November 2012

romantic and lovely.. enjoyed

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Donald Kuutsi 27 November 2012

wat a great poem indeed this is brilliant sir, masterpiece......

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 27 November 2012

Nicely penned, Asif. Thanks for sharing. It is good to have this passion and commitment to love a person. This is what our world needs, a kind of loving that leads to unity.

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Kevin Halls 27 November 2012

You must be in love Asif as all your poems lately are centred around this emotion! This one is simple and may I say childlike? Enjoyable though.

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Nader Baheri 27 November 2012

admirable love poem.i enjoyed its music. love will keep us alive.love will bind each others soul together.it is really ike a chain.maybe you have fallen in love with someone.huh? cheers~nb

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Marcus Mckinley 27 November 2012

it is our differnces that make us, and our similarities that bind us. the links of love are fragile if the ink does not dry.

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Sahil Sood 27 November 2012

really a nice poem sir, luvd readind it..

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Tribhuvan Mendiratta 27 November 2012

heartfelt expressions...well done!

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Andre Brown 27 November 2012

nice. simple yet direct.

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Hazel Durham 27 November 2012

What a beautiful love, written with such charm!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 November 2012

Tying your love with the chain of love is a wonderful imagination.Highly commendable.

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Kee Thampi 27 November 2012

a pain made this poem Winning your heart is Like winning world cup It is so much fun It is so much joy

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Gajanan Mishra 27 November 2012

O good love. good poem indeed. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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