With the chain of love
I have tied you up
Winning your heart is
Like winning world cup
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I loved the ninth and tenth line.....great and superb lovely write with the ink of love
short but superb! ! ! the lines Winning your heart is Like winning world cup really like it!
Love emerges positive energy and makes the world lively and sustainable good work
wat a great poem indeed this is brilliant sir, masterpiece......
Nicely penned, Asif. Thanks for sharing. It is good to have this passion and commitment to love a person. This is what our world needs, a kind of loving that leads to unity.
You must be in love Asif as all your poems lately are centred around this emotion! This one is simple and may I say childlike? Enjoyable though.
admirable love poem.i enjoyed its music. love will keep us alive.love will bind each others soul together.it is really ike a chain.maybe you have fallen in love with someone.huh? cheers~nb
it is our differnces that make us, and our similarities that bind us. the links of love are fragile if the ink does not dry.
Tying your love with the chain of love is a wonderful imagination.Highly commendable.
a pain made this poem Winning your heart is Like winning world cup It is so much fun It is so much joy
O good love. good poem indeed. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra
Wow this is so beautiful and lovely. This is how love is supposed to be, great write.