Chain Of High States Comments

Beautifull words come from beautifull heart. All of those created beautifull poem.

I'm obliged that I got to read such a lovely creation about Nature . The interestiing part is the continuty in the poem , how beautifully connected and carried on further . Hats off to you . This one is an inspiration for me . 10 arte one is this .

beautiful! ! ! ! i love how you were able to blend each sentence with the other.. you have a knack for poetry

you've made a great poem! i'll also try to write about nature next time...

very amazing & great poem, i loved it10+

i love the structure and connections that are made in the poem, they flow so beautifully, and how the connection jump, but stay intact. beautiful.

love it! very nicely written. a 10-rater..!

i love how each line leads on from the last - like a continuous story told by many each shaping it to fit their own desires but still conected to the previous (i do this a lot with my friends when we get board great fun) - and how at the end you've come full circle. full marks from me keep it up :)

Eruchie, Nature is spectacular charming humans, in body mind and soul. If there is any heaven 'it is here'....'it is here'...'it is here'.

you out did your self with this poem... great job

This is a really amazing and beautiful poem. Wonderful job!

A magnificent chain of beautiful metaphors: leading from one to another it was Amazing-------- very beautiful

nicely composed beautiful poem.

a chain of beautiful multiples that leads to splendor. how beautifully done voted10 surya

excellent visual metaphors: ''Splendour, the garden where the hearts bloom, Bloom into flowers bright like the fairies, '' excellent visual cognitive metaphors: ''Fairies captivating in their forms'' this poem seemingly touch the perfection of aesthetics...10++

This is wonderful Obinna. It leads the reader into such glorious images, each image breaking into the next. I need to read its beauty over and over again. You are a gifted poet indeed! 10! Karin Anderson