Chabbi Ram (A Children Poem) Comments

Wow.. What a fantastic write. I laughed a lot. Its really a good poem for children. They will surely love reading it. Loved it. +++10

Quite hilarious..... arouses interest not only in children, but in elders too! Enjoyed the 'feats' of Chabbi Ram especially the lines; But some people came back as minutes rolled To help Chabbi from his unearthly cold, (for he was trembling in fear) To rescue him from his plight And truck him to a safety site............'truck him' tells it all!

Aftab Sir, presently I am based in Karnataka, India by virtue of my job in the Railways. However, I had a long and lovely relationship with Assam and its beautiful people and this I shall always cherish.

Got chance to be thgere Rangiya, Jorhat and max time at Hasimara nice poem thanks

Very funny indeed and composed beautifully to amuse all and especially a joy to lovely children........10