Thursday, December 3, 2020

Cestrum Nocturnum Comments

Rating: 4.8

My body wakes up
In response
To the warmth
Of your body
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Nabakishore Dash 08 January 2022

Really beautiful love picture.

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Varsha M 15 December 2020

Ma'am this is really beautiful. You caught the snake with night Jasmine. Beautiful.

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M Asim Nehal 04 December 2020

Excellent, Raat ki rani " Gul-e-shabbo" ka kya khoob istemal kiya hai....

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2020

Body against the odds! Warmth of the night. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 04 December 2020

! What should I call it? Romance or a serpentine adventure under the spell of its favourite fragrance? An exquisite imagery: The snake entwines Night blooming cestrum nocturnum Intoxicated by its fragrance.

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Khairul Ahsan 03 December 2020

Intense fragrance of the 'Night blooming cestrum nocturnum' is truly intoxicating. I have heard that the snakes are attracted by its fragrance, but I wonder when the snakes 'entwine', if they get as warm as the humans. Loved your poem.5 Stars*****!

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Kostas Lagos 03 December 2020

Two lovers in the night...Classic! 5/5

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Deluke Muwanigwa 03 December 2020

Nice. I was calmly reading enjoying the flow until i met the snake. Gave it a cool twist

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