Certainty Comments
Time goes by and yet we pray,
"Dear Lord don't take me today."
We know it passes and never ceases
And still we yell, "But I've got reasons! "
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A poignant poem about death. Liked the opening lines. It conveys faith in the Lord. Beautifully crafted write with great rhyme.10
An insightful creation, written in good rhyme scheme. thanks for sharing Michelle.
A great start with a nice poem, Michelle. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.
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7/24/2025 1:08:26 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent poem, believe in the Lord and have constant trust. Man proposes, God disposes, but He promised a life with Love if we are loyal to Him. I have enjoyed very much this thought provoking poem. I cite your first lines: Time goes by and yet we pray, Dear Lord don't take me today. This is brilliantly worded. Keep the ink flowing, dear Poetess. God's Blessings be in Abundance for you and your beloved family. A 10+++++++++++++++++++for the votings.