Thursday, September 3, 2015

Cemetery Of The Arab World Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have fears that this world may cease to be
There is Death Death Only Death
I have fears that I may stop talking
There are lies lies only lies
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Pamela Sinicrope 14 March 2016

I wrote a comment and it didn't stay... Hate that. In short, well written poem, good use of poetic style, repetition, and the two parts. I was also moved by this write not only about the refugee crisis, but by the struggle for identity, and the appeal to the Muslim people. Powerful and fearless.

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Kelly Kurt 07 September 2015

A very poignant poem, Khaoula. I wish you and the world peace!

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Khaoula Basty 09 September 2015

Thank you

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 September 2015

But Khoula if people like you and me lose hope. I can feel your heart that there is so much violence in this world. Women and children are being killed like animals. It seems the end is coming. Let us do something good so long as we breathe.Thanks for sharing.Much love.

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Khaoula Basty 05 September 2015

yes the end is coming I feel that so I share peace and love all over the world :)

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