Sunday, September 21, 2008

Cellphone Comments

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Cellphone a high tech device for communication
Whether in emergency or rare situation
It's the most convenient way of reaching
your love ones in time of inevitable
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Marijo Pinero
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Dear poet Marijo, I like some striking pictures in your poem e.g. They resolved to using their cell-phones/to reach and say goodbye to their love ones.But you must put more of such expressions in your poems (less descriptions) .Go ahead. Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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