Wednesday, September 2, 2009

Cellophane Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

He sleeps,
Sleeps in the hope of something better,
Dreams of butterflies and shattered glass,
Acid rain and birdsong,
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Bethan Ackerley
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 September 2009

The dreams were illusive and fascinating.Lovely poem Bethan.

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Jennifer Wilson 02 September 2009

Thanks! I'm glad that someone enjoyed it!

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Monica Santander 02 September 2009

You can really feel and understand the character, and yet, you know that you don't really understand at all at the same time. Good descriptions!

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Joseph Poewhit 02 September 2009

Hits the nail on the head well.

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