Saturday, July 4, 2009

Cello Comments

Rating: 5.0

Largest of her sisters but smaller than her brother,
Who’s deep, booming voice echoes around.
(She however has perfect pitch; a lot like her brother in volume and sound) .
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A.E.K.G Navrilith
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Surperb imagination. Cleverly penned! Enjoyed the read! ; D

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The Doc 08 July 2009

Some very nice imagery in this one, good work.

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Adi Cox 05 July 2009

The personification of a musical instrument. I like the two f tatoos on her sides. A tongue in cheek idea that made me smile. It was an enjoyable poem to read.10/10.

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Hello. An admirable description. Colorful and melodious.10.

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