Wednesday, August 22, 2012

Cell Phone Sarcasms Comments

Rating: 5.0

This gent was texting while driving,
Happy, content and still thriving;
Crash! Boom! Was the sound
Heard by all those around,
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Joseph Anderson
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John Brown 19 September 2012

A great poem Joseph. I loved every line.

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Valsa George 08 September 2012

We often are callous about others' and even our own safety! Cell phones have become so indispensible that we use them not only while driving but even in our sleep! The 'catastrophe' instead of making us feel vexed has left us laughing, with your humourous touch to it!

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But the vicious impact has never been well understood. We need a rethinking in the interest of many....

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Walterrean Salley 26 August 2012

This topic amazes me. It seems that technology has taken over everything, with cell phones leading the way. It's a creepy world Joseph, and you have portrayed it well in this interesting piece. Bottom line - you're just an ole pro. You are very good Joseph!

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Heather Wilson 23 August 2012

Those cell phones have a lot to answer for, loved the second verse, texting is so clever these days, A great poem,

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Valerie Dohren 22 August 2012

It is against the law to use a mobile phone whilst driving yet people still continue to do it risking their lives and the lives of others - very good write, this poem should be on public display.

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