Cell Phone Poem Comments
I have no space,
have so much time,
out of the race
(meter and rhyme) .
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Short, to the point, and perfect cadence.... We often need brief little dalliances such as this abrupt array of words from time to time in order to cleanse the mind's palette.... Enjoyable read...
Time is insatiable. We are in want of more constantly. nice thought. kudos to you, Edgardo
enough time but no space...............simple words that carry so much of implications and observations......brilliant
What a good poem! You demonssrated well how a poet use ordinary things to express good messages. Great write
Delightful read, Edgardo, aware that there is not indeed enough space in a cell phone for more and more verses.
Neat concept of a cell phone poem. Hope you'll take the time to check out my poem, Cell Phone Junkies - Drugless Addiction. Thanks! Joshua C.
In an original way, involves accent of internal dynamism … 10
This was a nice two verse poem. I love to read them because of creativity. GW62
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7/29/2025 4:00:41 AM # 1.0.0
Very creative, Edgardo! Nice poem. Also, congrats on your poem being chosen as 'poem of the day'. Great honor and well-deserved!