I toss my focus towards the sky
To ask those knowing stars for truth
They wink at me in mute reply
Shedding rays from my distant youth
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I love that. Who can find the answers to life's questions, certainly not the stars readers. Just live, love and don't hate lest you die not living. Greatly woven.
I voted perfect 10 because of the great package of beauty
A compelling and creative composition that is excellently expressed! Well done my friend. Well deserved poem of the day!
Towards the sky. To view up with the muse of love. Nice piece of work.
'The cosmos hold grace most genteel With mystery stitched to enthrall' - these are one of the most delicious lines I ever read.The imagery is spellbinding in general, not a word is wasted in my opinion. Best wishes. A.
A very, very interesting poem. The rhymes are wonderful and the rhythm is well suited to the poem this is. This is a most appealing personal poem of growth and discovery. I don't often read one like this. It was well presented. I wish there were more like this one. I really can't find any major flaws. I certainly recommend it. GW62
An introspection or review of life bringing out all those pleasures and pain.....so wonderfully penned, with terrific metaphors, similies, very nice word play....I must read it again and again. Similar to my PAGES. in thought. Thanks for sharing.
Congrats on a well-deserve 'poem of the day' honor!