Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Celestial Sea Comments

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The tide washed out in his mind
and all that remained were glistening grains of sand.
Slick and glossy like tiny shards of crushed glass.
Tiny, individual thoughts being pulled back to the sea,
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Tai Chi Italy 07 October 2009

What a fantastic journey, this was to be part of Akil! I love your final line! as we both know, it's impossible. Smiling at you Tai

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