Celestial Rhapsody Comments

It's a love poem, an ethereal love that spans the whole universe dancing the celestial dance, creating the galaxy, the supernova, the dwarf star et all. The language is awesome and the momentum lightning. At times the expression has ascended to a dizzy height, but somehow the poet couldn't sustain that height all through the poem. Still, here's an excellent English poet going to be born. I feel proud of the poem. - -

A well crafted poem, I like it.Thanks to the poet

An exhilarating ride through space and language. The use of alliteration (triggered a turbulence; smashing the sphere; the mummy of memory) is well done, and appropriate. This is a poem that many native English-speakers would do well to take note of.

I enjoyed it! I gave it a ten! wonderful!

this is very beautiful i mean i love it i give you a 10++++++++++++

Right away, I like the title of this writing. Some of your lines can be condenced into more distinct visuals. Here again, it's subjective to how much illumination you feel captures the moment. You also want to watch how you catch on to the drawbacks of falling in love in the unplumbed depths of the end result. Overall, I think you have a very rich premium of wording which provides lots of force in meaning.

your very deep with ur words great job! ! 10++ DLG

deep thoughts and great contemplation of love and lovers..nice write....10

the love and the lover its amazing....10++ i cant wait to read more from you

profound thoughts as you described the love and the lover in great imagery......nobody knows the running creative mind of an individual therefore we shouldn't profess their existence.......................10