Saturday, November 28, 2009

$ Celestial Rays $ Comments

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Can you see the rays 'o' my love?
The rays of bright tomorrow that we hoped.
It's making it's way to the hills from the blue ocean below,
To light our dreams with it's colour so mellow.
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Menime Soul
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Tanya Stanford 30 December 2009

you are truly gifted in expressing yourself through the use of words. another lovely piece of poetry.

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Kristen Burbella 28 November 2009

sigh. wish i could be so positive.

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young writer Athira 28 November 2009

you are a great writer........hey I am thrilled now coz I got some comments from an amazing writer.......

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Joseph Poewhit 28 November 2009

The Lord is the direction and way

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