Celestial Observations Comments

I love star gazing! Barry was right...this was a fun poem! Hugs, Dee

Chuck, Lots of fun and nicely done! B.V.A.

I love the mystery of the celestial phenomena - we did a play at school about Venus getting to marry Darkness (personified as a mishievous character) and Leap Year (personified as a beautiful girl called 'Skrikkeljanie' in Afrikaans) marrying the Sun - a benevolent character - loved your poem! Glad you opted to dance with Venus first. Kind regards, Margaret.

very special this one. some great lines i may find myself nicking. (only kiddin') -ish.

A mind-boggling tease between the stars and planets...you should drink less...siriously! Brightened my day, yet again :) Jack.

what a sight! ! ! ...charles floating free in the universe with venus! ! ! ...enjoyed this a lot...love...nalini

A cosmic write for sure! Justine :)

Poetic genious! your words are finely crafted and your appraoch is amazing! Love Duncan X

Lovelovelove the sky-high creative spark here, Chuck... This is a very pretty poem, and I cannot choose a favorite line. It's absolutely perfect, a favorite. Est : ]

Lovely wordings, a pretty innovative poem.

heavenly work Charles. 10 from Tai, star gazer

CHARLES, I CAN SEE EVERY WORD, GREAT POEM