Monday, May 13, 2013

Celestial Lights Comments

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As even falls on northerly skies
Rainbow-clad dainty fairies
Cherubs from heaven hand in hand
Flaring, fluttering gowns grand
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Yasmin Khan
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Chandra Thiagarajan 22 May 2013

A captivating poem which excels in the presentation with beautiful rhyme scheme, Jas meen!

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Kanav Justa 21 May 2013

the usage of words were exceptional, , , , , great write

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Wahab Abdul 17 May 2013

another lovely poem of yours, this a clean poetry, enjoyed fully...

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Valsa George 14 May 2013

The firmament adorned with celestial bodies is indeed a treat to the eyes! You have captured the full beauty of it! !

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Valerie Dohren 14 May 2013

Aurora Borealis, a beautiful sight - lovely poem, very descriptive.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 May 2013

beautiful lovely poem with its words nice to read, nice to make the image.with colours deserve....

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