Monday, July 22, 2024

Celestial Blood Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blurry bloody ballet of a summer sky
hear a wet weeping beyond arid walls
daily horror creeping into sheltered lives
hear the swearing beyond a thick fog isle
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Alyx True Edge
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 15 September 2024

A small poem, with wider space-time spread…all the laws governing the universe go astray..

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Alyx True Edge 21 September 2024

beautifully expressed in your comment, I am happy you could feel the significance of that very moment. It's mainly about the (emotional) fights and abuses seeming so profoundly wrong in a universe carrying on its sunset play and time moving on. Time passes, hurt remains

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