Celestial Blood Poem by Alyx True Edge

Celestial Blood

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Blurry bloody ballet of a summer sky
hear a wet weeping beyond arid walls
daily horror creeping into sheltered lives
hear the swearing beyond a thick fog isle
nobody there bestowing hope upon you
your eyes follow ultimate strings of light
as the night suppresses celestial blood

['Celestial Blood' by Alyx True Edge,2024]

Monday, July 22, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,poems,despair,dark,darkness,loneliness,depression,sunset
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written from an distant outside perspective on a situation concerning myself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 15 September 2024

A small poem, with wider space-time spread…all the laws governing the universe go astray..

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Alyx True Edge 21 September 2024

beautifully expressed in your comment, I am happy you could feel the significance of that very moment. It's mainly about the (emotional) fights and abuses seeming so profoundly wrong in a universe carrying on its sunset play and time moving on. Time passes, hurt remains

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