Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Celestial Beauty Comments

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I look to the heavens and say what if
As our minds together drift
Beaming dreams our hearts take flight
Ignited your aura comes to life
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Marcus McKinley
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Liza Sudina 05 December 2016

ai - is a tonic syllable in this poem. it makes soul bounce and feel wonder!

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Marcus Mckinley 05 December 2016

you have found the vowel play in my poem. thanks for you great comment

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