Celebration Comments

This poem is all about hope for a lost world. A wonderful message. Thanks.

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wow very enjoyable, i loved the imagery in the beginning. Nice piece. Sydney

Fine reminder of what Christmas is all about. good write

An interesting, well-written read. Glad I stumbled up on it.

Hello Ariel, How are you, this is very enjoyable.. Excellent! ! Carolyn

Good poem here Ariel you do have a way with words

I love the opening lines. Flickers of silver lights transversed the skies... good thoughts put into pen... however the middle of the poem, was a little weak imagery-wise. It seems like you can write a lot of good images into your poetry, but it was a little weask in the middle... but beautiful poetry. Glad to have read your work. ~Namita

Hi, dear, freinds in poetry. Well, you have a good style. I like your poem. Its true, I got lot of poems here for this is my way of relaxing and expressing my views in life.

Beautiful piece of thoughtful poetry! Ariel this poem is written so simply but with many meanings and depth behind your words.I love the way you structured this poem and I look forward to reading more of your work soon! Take care of U... =Shelley=

Nicely put, i probably could not have put it better myself, donch know? A tenner fer sure(as they say, down in the valley in California.) God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

I like the double meaning created by the metaphors in lines 1- 3 and line 5. 1. Could this mean that it is paradoxical that what the saviour came to erase (misdeeds) is instead taking place on the very annivesary of his birthdate (bombs - suggestive of brutal human destruction) ? 2.Could this also mean the grandeur way in which Christians decide to remind themselves of the wonderful Saviour who decided to give His precious life to set free the apparently sinful and insignficant man so that (he) man may not perish but have eternal life? Whatever the meaning, Ariel Escalona has done wonderful penwork in amalgamating ideas with words to produce this grandeur piece.

Verse seems to convey varied celebrations - some silent, some reverberating; I join the celebration and singing of hymns on the Saviour for an ever-lasting peace & happiness. Well done. thanks.

interesting piece, , .thanks

short and sweet, very nice

This is pure Joy in its purest form....Timeless...bravo...

this is simple and neat!