Tuesday, March 2, 2021

Celebration Comments

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CELEBRATION
The cell rang for a final dispensation
my doc's heart beat stopped for a moment
it was conveyed that I had come out safe
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me poet yeps poet
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Tex Morton 03 March 2021

Why waste time?

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me poet yeps poet 03 March 2021

Well in hopes we live still it's not age but mind which kills THANKS ALL FOR SELECTING THIS LINE

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Well in hopes we live still it's not age but mind which kills

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Varsha M 02 March 2021

Well in hopes we live still it's not age but mind which kills....i really liked these lines. Your last his makes your poem look incomplete

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Varsha M 02 March 2021

Oh that sounds good C for cremation was misunderstood with C for celebration. I send another C for congratulations thst you got another chance for celebration.

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