When God sat down to make a woman
He gave her empathy love and compassion,
By the time he finished with her
He had no more left for the man.
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Part 2. The only point I fail to understand is that, why the poem is named "Celebrating Women's Day"? It is not a thought which should be restricted to women's day. But, everyday, every man!
Marvellous poem. Powerfully states why woman is the stronger gender. And asks the most pertinent question why should she be treated otherwise?
woow very powerful am impressed can u please send me more poems on my e mail
An insight tribute to womanhood well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Mamta.
Can you translate it in french Would you be able to help me make my own poem
Happy to read your poems again, always plenty of things to learn, thank you for sharing, brilliant courageous celebration, cheers!
Mam, simply awesome! He had no more left for man! ! ! This line holds the entire meaning. Lovely mam. I am short of words mam... Women put yourselves....you will have a ball...Awesome mam. Yes mam, we women don't love ourselves as much as we love others. T
The poem have so much relevance to the period we are witnessing.
The poem have so much relevance to the period we are witnessing. A beautiful poem.
World against women nicely put together in a poetic form, point to ponder on............Loved it.
Women love yourselves, and put yourselves first But please you must Not voice it at all This way I promise you will have a ball......yes, it is good suggestion. This poem is very nicely and aptly presented. Best word choice. many thanks..........10
You seem to believe there is salvation in feigning. I have always stood with women and their rights as equal partners in life. If a few think that women are to be subjugated, feigning is not the solution to circumvent their prejudice. Women, there are lots of men who think you are equal to them. So, please don't take recourse to pretense. This poem is well rhymed and structured. It therefore goes with a 9.
It’s one of the greatest poems that I have read about the discrimination of women at the hands of men. There is pain and pun, wit and fun, hypocrisy and reality and much more suggesting how to root out the social evils. This is like a fact finding mission. To quote: No matter what a woman achieves / She rarely receives / The acknowledgement which she deserves / Yet she is able to preserve / Her sanity and peace. Thanks.
If this is the kind of advice women are following, then no wonder women of the world have to 'fight' for 'rights', which 'rights' is only a perception in the mind of the perceiver.
A brilliant write celebrating women, you have summed up the female race so well Mamta, thanks Lynda xx 10
A long one, but very well done....., I enjoyed it. Keep up the great work. Regards, Trade.
If you think that "God" is a "He", what kind woman are you? Why is it that God can not be a "She"?