In order to celebrate the New Year
Many are going to the Mars this year,
But they won't get there cake
Or pudding they won't make
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Romantic poem but practically it is difficult to do so, they only will dream
i would use Mars, not the Mars. and i may be 'picky', but i'd write on Mars, not in Mars, .......unless you are planning to visit underground there. maybe? for me, water doesn't rhyme so well with.... year, but it IS close enough. i've read that there is NO water, but some ice; they could melt the ice, couldn't they? a cute idea for a poem. i read of your poem on Savita's poem page (see her comment, below) . i like your poem better, so there! to MyPoemList. bri ;)
In order to celebrate the New Year Many are going to the Mars this year, so funny limerick! ! ! ! ! , great share
In order to celebrate the New Year Many are going to the Mars this year, But they won't get there cake Or pudding they won't make There is too, hardly a drop of water. this poem is full of wisdom
Celebrating The New Year In The Mars - Limerick - love this poem dear poet, I vote 10
When it comes to singing New Year Grand celebrations on Mars gear Scientists are holding a convention Honoring a rare Martian invention A waterless cake recipe- I hear! This is inspired by your poem and my comment on it. I have posted it on my page as ‘ Waterless Cake’. Thanks for sharing your limerick.
That is so true! They better come to this earth to celebrate new year or find a new waterless recipe for their cake on mars!
This Limerick poem amazes mind and outlines the celebration of New Year without cake in Mars. You have brilliant ideas to share always...10
Or pudding they won't make There is too, hardly a drop of water.
Happy new year poet, thanks, .............