Cedar Trees Comments

hey, suzanne! i suspect, even if i hadn't had a prose preview of this experience, that i would have appreciated your description which brought me in to share this experience. and the ending, with its wondering and looking back in time, gives it a satisfying depth of perspective. i thought of two poems of my own reading it, after all day hike and pristine. -glen

What could have driven them Deep into the mountains alone? Did it feel like a womb? Did it feel like a tomb? Wow, what a poem, so beautiful, so delicately written, so thought provoking.. Love your skill of writing dear poetess. Thanks for the nice poem.10+++++++++++++++

Like mendicant monks we keep moving. We feel utterly cut off from the familiar. We open the windows and smell the green...did it feel like a womb..... fine poetic imagaination..... your poetic heart wanders in the woods hearing the sounds of silence.. simply beautifullllllll. thank you dear poetess. tony