Thursday, March 17, 2005

Cedar Avenue Bridge Comments

Rating: 5.0

'And would you', said the lovely maiden
in Minnesota's early hours,
where in deep snow moonlight was fading,
'come up and have a drink, your flowers
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Sandra Osborne 18 March 2005

This poem should also prove to everyone that the Trolls give out 'ones' without even reading a work. This kind of person has no place on this site. This is a wonderful poem and it is a slap in the face of every poet here for such excellent work to be denegrated by a 'one'.

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Sandra Osborne 18 March 2005

10 from me too. You are the best story teller on this site. No one comes even close.

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Rich Hanson 17 March 2005

Loved the story. I've been there and you made me homesick. Fine tale too.

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Christine Magee 17 March 2005

A wonderful tale that held me until the end. A 10 from me Good wishes Chrissie

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Allan James Saywell 17 March 2005

Herbert are you having a (1) problem i thought i had exclusive rights to the figure (1) this poem in work alone has to be at the worst at least a 8 or 9 it must be the insidious group of anglo saxons, wait where anglo saxons is there any more yorkshiremen left, i thought the ripper ripped them that was the woman, wasn't it anyway i think your worth a ten Warm regards Allan

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