Ceaseless Pursuit Comments

a good poem...last stanza very well written...motivating write 10

A very good message giving poem. You earned all your votes in the last line itselt. But you may try to structure the poems for a better effect........10+++

the insenity of mankind leads them no where..... beautiful phrase. very thoughtful write.

a thought provoking indeed, why to search for that which will be left behind...great write 10+

The pursuit is worth an effort..............making a comeback to retain something amissed? ? ? perhaps worth a try! ! ! ! nice piece Garga! !